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Equipment:
Canon eos 350D
Canon EF 50 mm f: 1.8 II
Haida Close-up+4
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First of all I have to say Im suprised that 'The Journey' by *Healzo is the only image from the series that is put up for critique. Even though it's a great capture I feel like there are better ones in there.

Okay, after having said that, let's get to the critique, shall we?

There is an excellent idea behind the image. It's almost like macro meets portrait journalism. While beeing innovative it doesn't push it too far. The square format woks perfectly for the image. It's almost like looking through a tube to a different world. The background is perfect and adds a lot to image's overall reception.

The depth of field however I feel is a bit off. We have the subject in focus, but a blurry branch in the foreground really messes up the image reception for me. I also find the lightning on the ladybug too staged. It takes you back from another world to the studio.

That being said, this is image is still a great capture, that I feel work really well. To be honest I could see that hanging on the walls in people's houses.

Good work Joakim!

Mateusz Miłobędzki aka Carrambinho
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Kathi-Maelstorm Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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Dora12310 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011   Photographer
can we do this extra close and beautiful pictures with macro filter?
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Azleas2 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you think that the difference between canon 50mm f/1.4 and f/1.8 II is big?
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AliceSKF Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
very very nice..:)
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DismayedSense Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured :D [link]
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SoLoveIsPunk Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010   Photographer
You're beautiful work is featured here [link] ! :meow:
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Healzo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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SoLoveIsPunk Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010   Photographer
You're very welcome! :hug:
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steelwinged Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
I never thought I'd actually favourite a ladybug picture, but I really like the contrasting colours and how the ladybug stands out, and the photo is generally pleasing to the eye.
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Healzo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:giggle: thank you!
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teyasaveleva Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful! As ever :clap:
I wonder what's the name of the plant it is crawling and how can one possibly get it? ;)
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Healzo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. I have no idea what kind of plant/root it is, i found it on the ground :aww: im sorry.
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RebellionDust Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Amazing Oo I love It !
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red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it. =) Yay for no more humpity-hump-humps. XD

Ari chan
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xPictures Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Wow so beautiful !
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Sparsko Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Great. :)
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Carana0 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Student Writer
How in the world did you manage to get close enough to a ladybug for all of these shots? Of course there's the zoom, but really that's close! :XD:
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Healzo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I used a close-up filter :aww:
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Carana0 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Student Writer
Nice. :D
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ClaudiaMiranda Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
nice nice nice :DD
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Blue2Green Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
cute :meow:
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Ondamarina Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
:sun: Wonderful!
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Nilofaar Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Student Photographer
that's more than AWESOME!!!

keep it up ..!!
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incredibledictu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
magnificient as usual. :meow:
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jk3y Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Student Digital Artist
veldig fint bilde
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Healzo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Takk Joakim:)
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