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Anyway, enough blabbering. On to the more important part of the critique: the actual critique!
Vision is first. I especially love how you set this up. I honestly believe that the image's meaning differs per person. ( so I don't know what this means for you, but I believe whatever idea you had for this was well played and very beautiful.) For vision, 5/5
Originality next. I think I'll give this a 4.5/5 because while it is a gorgeous piece of work, there are other smoke photos out there. however, I don't think I have seen one quite like this. Again, I am only speaking for myself.
For technique, I'm not sure exactly what I'm supposed to rate here. if it is individual style, then I'd definitely give it a 5/5. so here it is.
And last but not least impact. I believe this piece is wonderful and means a lot for each individual person. However this piece did not strike me with anything more than "wow that's really beautiful." If you'd like my personal opinion, I think you could try working on telling a story for each individual photo. as I said before, this is gorgeous but other than that feeling, I am not feeling very much impact-wise here. I'll give you a 2.5 because I think that is appropriate.
In conclusion, thank you for sharing your work with the people of deviantart. I really enjoy everything I see from you and I hope to see a lot more in the future! I hope this was a fair critique.
Best of wishes.
-kt
(P.s.. excuse any small or large grammatical errors if you can... I went through it after writing to see if there were any but it's 12 at night here while I'm writing this so there's a large possibility there are quite a few.)
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