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Canon eos 350D
Canon EF 50 mm f: 1.8 II

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Critique by notcontrolfreaky Apr 2, 2009, 11:39:49 AM
Hi Joakim! Just trying to write my first critique. Enjoy!

First off all I have to say I really like the depth in this pic. The little flower on the left, the only thing sharp in the pic, looks so separated from the other part of the pic. It looks really sharp and crisp. Which is a very good thing.

I think you did good on the composition. Maybe to distract the viewers' attention from the top right corner (it's pretty light), you could cut it down a little bit. Maybe an entire cover of yellow on the top of the pic would be better. Don't know really.

And maybe place the bigger flower, the start of the yellow cover in the top of the pic, a bit more to the left .. It might give it a more 'moving' composition. This way it looks a bit static.

But hey! What rests, you know! ;) A very nice picture :) I just can't stop staring at the little flower :slow:
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April 2, 2009
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