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The big unknow world..

looks like he's relaxing in his new sofa :giggle:

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Canon eos 350D
Canon EF 50 mm f: 1.8 II
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:iconladyrapid:
A very cute shot here of a little snail-fella indeed.
The thing I see here is that it's a bit much in the bokeh department. All the brighter light there shown as bokeh has a very strong part of this shot due to it's intensity.
Often this is a great aspect of working with light, to have angles of bokeh to strenghten up the scene but here I think it takes the overhand a bit much and makes the scene less interesting in comparison if you would've had other tones of colors there or any for of texture.

The benifitial thing about using/working with bokeh is that you get a hellova DOF in the scene itself.

Great setup and sweet photo, just don't use the brighter bokeh too much when composing a scene like this, if you're unlucky it can get too much attention as I think it have here.

Keep shootin mate, I'm amazed on your development the last couple of months. Keep it up!

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:iconmummsywummsy:
That`s so sweet!

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:iconthesanake:
Really nice shot! :) Great use of d.o.f!
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SO TENDER

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So cute! ^.^=

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he is wondering :)))))) :+fav:

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:iconolejacob:
Kjempefint bilde! Utrolig flott DOF! :D

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this ones really fantastic :)
:iconcarrotstalker:
Ooh, now that's an interesting composition. I love the colours and how cute that little snail looks :giggle: Kjempefint bilde! :D

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Snail Catapault fire!

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